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Remark 1:
Note that the sentence is incomplete. Do you mean “planar regions”? Please check, and revise accordingly.Explanations
[Explanation1]: Language:
The unnecessary introductory phrase has been deleted.
[Explanation2]: Grammar:
Here a determiner is required for emphasis.
[Explanation3]: Grammar:
Here the article “a” has been repeated for better readability.
[Explanation4]: Grammar:
An article is preferably used in "of" constructions.
[Explanation5]: Grammar:
Because the aforementioned result is being referred to here, a determiner has been used for clarity.
[Explanation6]: Language:
This revision has been made to make the sentence clear and more readable.
[Explanation7]: Article usage:
The use of articles can be avoided with plural nouns.
[Explanation8]: Language:
Starting a new paragraph with the pronoun “its” is awkward, even if the pronoun is referring to the heading of the section. The revision has been made for readability.
[Explanation9]: Language:
Here the sentence has been broken into two different sentences for better readability
[Explanation10]: Grammar:
Here the missing verb has been added.
[Explanation11]: Punctuation:
Here a colon has been added since the information following it is the description of the phrase before the colon.
[Explanation12]: Grammar:
Here the subject is singular, therefore, the verb should also be singular.
[Explanation13]: Punctuation:
Here a comma is needed to separate the introductory clause.
[Explanation14]: Style:
Here the first term of a sentence should be capitalized.
[Explanation15]: Grammar:
Here “triangle” is countable and therefore would take an article.
[Explanation16]: Punctuation:
Colon is ideally used only when presenting a list or when preceded by terms such as "following." Therefore, this has been deleted here.
[Explanation17]: Punctuation:
Set-off commas have been used for the description of R provided in the sentence.
[Explanation18]: Grammar:
Here the subject "sides" is plural; therefore, the verb should be plural as well.
[Explanation19]: Grammar:
First person plural pronouns are preferred in academic manuscripts.
[Explanation20]: Spelling:
Here the spelling has been rectified for accuracy.
[Explanation21]: Grammar:
In American English, that is used to introduce a restrictive clause and which a nonrestrictive clause.
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Remark 1:
Note that you have explained “finitely additive” later in the text. Please check whether it needs to be explained here instead.Remark 2:
Although this description is appropriate, note that on several occasions Green’s theorem is described as a two-dimensional case of Stokes’ theorem. Please check whether the highlighted sentence requires revision.Remark 3:
Note that the sentence is incomplete. Do you mean “planar regions”? Please check, and revise accordingly.Remark 4:
Please check whether our edit has retained your intended meaning.Explanations
[Explanation1]: Language:
The unnecessary introductory phrase has been deleted.[Explanation2]: Structural change:
Structural rearrangement suggested via a remark.[Explanation3]: Language:
This revision has been made to make the sentence clear and more readable.[Explanation4]: Language:
This is a repetition of the point noted in the earlier sentence; hence, it has been deleted.[Explanation5]: Content Change:
A remark added to notify the author about a common convention used in the subject.[Explanation6]: Language:
Starting a new paragraph with the pronoun “it” is awkward, even if the pronoun is referring to the heading before the paragraph. The revision has been made for readability.[Explanation7]: Language:
Here one sentence has been broken into two different sentences for better readability.[Explanation8]: Word Choice:
A more formal word has been used her to maintain the academic tone of the document.[Explanation9]: Language:
The definition of “finitely additive” was edited for more clarity. Further, this change has been pointed out to the author for verification.
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